Sunday, March 28, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The picture below is the inspiration and a 140 character limit sets the parameters. Susan at Stony River is the host of this Microfiction Monday. Please click here to check out Susan's excellent site and learn more about Microfiction Monday.

Here is this weeks Microfiction Monday picture and my 'micro' short story.


Do you remember when our eyes first met below this bridge Rita? Of course Hank, I remember it nine months to the day before Jake was born.

27 comments:

  1. Me thinks Hank and Rita were doing something else than enjoying the View way back then. Nice one Christopher.

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  2. oh-ho! Tooo cute!~ Your bridge is a little quicker than mine! Youth can be that way. It is probably how a lot of us got here. Thanks to youth and vigor; and a quiet bridge by the river.
    Have a great week!

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  3. AH so sweet...and funny! bravo!

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  4. LOL...love it. Women never forget LOL. Good story :)

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  5. A most productive bridge :-)
    Enjoyed that.

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  6. You mean old people, like you know...oh gross Here be mine.

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  7. A wonderful thought provoking photo. Now we see what thoughts it provoked in you.
    Very to the point.
    Thank you.

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  8. Wonder if they take a trip down memory lane and go below the bridge every now and then?

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  9. Wow.. your MM brings back memories.. LOL
    Lovely 55!

    Mine is here Happy MM! Have a wonderful week! hugs shakira

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  10. Is that bridge by any chance named, Point Conception? o_O

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  11. Sweet and funny at the same time - I love it! So what's Elwood's story btw?
    ;-)

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  12. I love your story. I love Susan's too. A totally different slant from your. These little photos inspire so many varied thoughts.

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  13. Naughty hank and Rita. :) Fun.

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  14. Ah, a sweet one. Good for you!

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  15. A little gem.




    Aloha from Hawaii my Friend!


    Comfort Spiral

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  16. And, looking down, they spotted her much-decayed underwear, long-forgotten, not-so-missed.

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  17. Lieber Chrisopher,

    ich wünsche dir von Herzen Ein glückliches osterfest

    Herzlichst, Rachel

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  18. That is so clever and so cute. :)

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  19. Are they planning for a similar story? ;)

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  20. Very creative story! It makes me smile...
    Great photo too.

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