Sunday, March 28, 2010

Microfiction Monday

The picture below is the inspiration and a 140 character limit sets the parameters. Susan at Stony River is the host of this Microfiction Monday. Please click here to check out Susan's excellent site and learn more about Microfiction Monday.

Here is this weeks Microfiction Monday picture and my 'micro' short story.


Do you remember when our eyes first met below this bridge Rita? Of course Hank, I remember it nine months to the day before Jake was born.
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26 comments:

  1. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}March 28, 2010 at 8:02 PM

    Me thinks Hank and Rita were doing something else than enjoying the View way back then. Nice one Christopher.

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  2. AllisonianMarch 28, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    oh-ho! Tooo cute!~ Your bridge is a little quicker than mine! Youth can be that way. It is probably how a lot of us got here. Thanks to youth and vigor; and a quiet bridge by the river.
    Have a great week!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 28, 2010 at 9:17 PM

    AH so sweet...and funny! bravo!

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  4. SuzMarch 28, 2010 at 9:55 PM

    you rascal!
    ***1/2

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  5. AnonymousMarch 28, 2010 at 10:36 PM

    LOL...love it. Women never forget LOL. Good story :)

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  6. anthonynorthMarch 29, 2010 at 3:27 AM

    A most productive bridge :-)
    Enjoyed that.

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  7. John (@bookdreamer)March 29, 2010 at 4:02 AM

    You mean old people, like you know...oh gross Here be mine.

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  8. SouthLakesMomMarch 29, 2010 at 8:09 AM

    Excellent and a giggle to boot!

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  9. AnonymousMarch 29, 2010 at 8:50 AM

    A wonderful thought provoking photo. Now we see what thoughts it provoked in you.
    Very to the point.
    Thank you.

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  10. AnonymousMarch 29, 2010 at 9:22 AM

    Wonder if they take a trip down memory lane and go below the bridge every now and then?

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  11. UnknownMarch 29, 2010 at 10:59 AM

    Wow.. your MM brings back memories.. LOL
    Lovely 55!

    Mine is here Happy MM! Have a wonderful week! hugs shakira

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  12. quillyMarch 29, 2010 at 12:42 PM

    Is that bridge by any chance named, Point Conception? o_O

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  13. Susan at Stony RiverMarch 29, 2010 at 1:11 PM

    Sweet and funny at the same time - I love it! So what's Elwood's story btw?
    ;-)

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  14. bobbieMarch 29, 2010 at 1:16 PM

    I love your story. I love Susan's too. A totally different slant from your. These little photos inspire so many varied thoughts.

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  15. KristineMarch 29, 2010 at 3:11 PM

    lol. under the bridge too!

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  16. julianaMarch 29, 2010 at 4:28 PM

    sweet and naughty ;)

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  17. NessaMarch 29, 2010 at 4:54 PM

    Naughty hank and Rita. :) Fun.

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  18. hopeMarch 29, 2010 at 6:21 PM

    Ah, a sweet one. Good for you!

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  19. CloudiaMarch 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM

    A little gem.




    Aloha from Hawaii my Friend!


    Comfort Spiral

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  20. JocelynMarch 30, 2010 at 2:24 AM

    And, looking down, they spotted her much-decayed underwear, long-forgotten, not-so-missed.

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  21. ksdoolittleMarch 30, 2010 at 4:48 PM

    Perfect!!

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  22. RachelApril 1, 2010 at 2:16 PM

    Lieber Chrisopher,

    ich wünsche dir von Herzen Ein glückliches osterfest

    Herzlichst, Rachel

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  23. HilaryApril 7, 2010 at 12:31 AM

    That is so clever and so cute. :)

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  24. StacieApril 8, 2010 at 2:37 AM

    Very cool!!

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  25. KirigalpoththaApril 12, 2010 at 12:07 AM

    Are they planning for a similar story? ;)

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  26. sonia a. mascaroApril 14, 2010 at 2:36 PM

    Very creative story! It makes me smile...
    Great photo too.

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